After a few weeks of study, I looked back at the post I had written before, and I was shocked that I would deny my work and revise it more wisely. I’m going to compare the two Post screenshots.

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I couldn’t get a clear shot because of the setting, but we can see clearly that I changed the layout. The reason is that when I looked at my Blog 3 again, I didn’t want to read my words. My first impression was that there were so many words mixed together that I couldn’t read them with interest. Not to mention for a stranger reader, my blog from the beginning was lost at the beginning. So I broke it up and gave each paragraph a subheading so that the reader knew at a glance what was going on in that paragraph.

In addition, I inserted two photos to correspond to my paragraph. Let’s start with the first picture, which shows a farmer checking the condition of his plants and helping them when appropriate. If plants are compared to us, then farmers may be the people who help us in life, affecting our entire growth process. If farmers had not helped the plants, they might have died. Another implication is that we only grow the right plants in the right places. Maybe this land won’t grow rice, right? These pictures can give the reader a visual impact, even thinking, rather than simple words, which are too boring.

Finally, I also added a question for readers at the end of the Blog, my purpose is to let readers read my article, and have their own thinking, so as to deepen their understanding.